https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4i9f0ODXcfQ
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Looking at my video i can state that it was an overall good presentation . The reason why I'm saying so is because I presented each point of the PowerPoint by explaining my idea and analysing it to my audience. ,However i personally think the was some few point where i could have emphasise ideas more , for instance I didn't really know what to say when they asked me about what ideas i have for the radio this is because I'm still going through production skill with the radio ideas. The other reason why i could answer is because i didn't want to give a lot out . Next time I will improve...
- Body Language and language
- Voice
- Be more confident in what I say
- Engage with the audience
- Stop repeating the same sentence if it doesn't come out.
One of the feedbacks that i received is to change the storyline between radio and TV. I personally think that this advise is good as i will want my radio to be different and target the older generation. So what I'm thinking to do is to add something like this at the begging ''Are you tired of buying kids sweet and toys then listen this is for you1!!''. I personally think this is one of the best ideas in order to get the parents easily as they would want to know what.
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